Wow, I think that was the most thought out notes for a fic I've every seen. I'm all for it being long and drawn out, and you know explicit isn't always necessary for a story to be hot.

I can offer nothing in response to what you've written as I'm a complete vanilla. I like to read the stuff when its well done, but that's as far as I go. *sigh* I'm just so boring.

On a completely shallow side, Ianto in a charcoal gray silk shirt, guh. I have this strange thing about dark colored silk shirts, don't ask I've no idea why. And there should so be a Switchy!Ianto scene, just for the sheer humor of it.