I agree, I had 'em talking far too much like, well, *me* in Negotiation, but once I'd gotten it all written down... frankly I was too bloody tired of looking at it to fix it up. Or are you talking about Incognito? Ah well, no harm done, 'tis only fanfic. If I was getting paid for this (oh, bliss!) I'd worry a lot more about it. :)

Getting them both to drop their respective masks is even more interesting than getting them to orgasm.

Aptly put!

I wonder how y'all will take the switchy!Ianto bit I've got cued up, then... 'tis already written (damn plotbunnies!) but it's too early in the series to introduce that aspect yet.

Meanwhile, I need a club to quit Owen from (ahem) horning in on things. Again, maybe someday, but not yet, dammit.

Naturally, what happens *next* is completely eluding me. Dratted non-linear creative process... :-D