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Bloody hell, I hope this phase fizzles out soon, as I'm not sure how much of it I can take. [livejournal.com profile] moviegrrl? You might not want to read this before work.

Title: None, unless you lot suggest one, because I'm so frackin' lazy.
Pairing: Jack/Owen
Rating: NC-17, I guess, although I think it's a rather mild NC-17
Summary: Jack/Owen PWP, discarded from the outline for the sequel to User Friendly because I'm trying to write a farce for that, goddamnit.

***

“This is a bloody outrage, this is,” Owen blustered, still trying to shake free from the lingering scent of Tosh’s perfume. He always figured she’d try to get revenge for the events of the past new year’s eve, but she’d struck below the belt, literally, and left Owen embarrassed and frustrated – but mostly embarrassed, just as Jack had walked into the firing range with a ready quip and a grin that stopped just short of an outright leer.

“I don’t think you’re as outraged as you pretend, Dr. Harper.” Jack approached Owen with a predatory gleam in his eye.

Oh shit. Owen didn’t fancy his chances against Jack in full pursuit mode, nor was Owen entirely sure he’d want to run away all that quickly. He retreated until the shooting bench dug into the back of his legs, only to end up with Jack standing centimeters away, practically looming over him. Owen tried to maintain his composure, but knew he was failing.

“I know this for two reasons.” Jack breathed, forcing Owen to come even closer to hear him. “One, you didn’t shoot me the last time we were down here together, despite being given ample reason to do so and, two,” Jack ran his hand down Owen’s stomach, pushing his palm against Owen’s crotch. “Well, I think that speaks for itself, doesn’t it?” Jack smiled, smugly satisfied as he groped Owen’s persistent erection.

“It usually does,” Owen gasped, wondering if he should try to put a brake on things and simultaneously realizing it was too late.

“I rest my case.” Jack’s pulled Owen close for a rough, blatantly honest kiss.

Oh god, screwing around with the boss, such a bad idea, he thought a little incoherently, even as he sucked on Jack’s tongue and rubbed against his grasping hand. Really, really bad. But he hadn’t been a terribly good person of late, had he?

Owen tore himself away from Jack’s mouth. “This is a bad idea.” Didn’t Gwen say that to me? Just a few days ago? She didn’t sound all that certain, either.

“I don’t think you really believe that.” Jack countered, dexterously unzipping Owen’s trousers and freeing his cock. “Tell me to stop.” He suggested, holding Owen’s gaze along with his dick.

Owen gritted his teeth and tried to look at anything but Jack. Jack’s hand rubbed slowly up and down the length of him, compelling Owen to grunt and move reflexively.

“Tell me to stop.” Jack insisted, like it was a dare. But he couldn’t. Owen just gasped and tried not to think of shredded dignity. Jack chuckled quietly, taking firmer possession and giving Owen what he wanted.

“Christ…” Why did men have to be so good at wanking? Oh yeah, years of practice. Owen gave up any pretense of reluctance and tried to help Jack along – only to have his hand swatted away.

“This one’s on me.” Jack said, firmly.

It certainly is about to be. Owen struggled for coherence. “Jack... I’m..." he gave up.

“I know.” Jack watched him closely. It was greedy, he knew, but one of his chief pleasures was watching someone come – ideally by his hand, cock or whatever else happened to be available. He liked to think that it could be a revelatory moment, a glimpse of someone at their most vulnerable. And, admittedly, it was extraordinarily hot, too.

Owen tried to maintain control, the struggle writ large on his face – as if appearances mattered when a man was on the verge of orgasm. Jack knew that Owen was losing that battle, given how he couldn’t quite meet Jack’s gaze. God, there was something positively shy about it... The same couldn’t be said for the way Owen held on to him. Jack hoped he’d leave bruises, if only for a while.

Owen had braced himself against Jack, rigidly maintaining a distance, but as composure collapsed, so did he, burying his head in the crook of Jack’s neck, using his body to muffle a strangled shout. Rather than yielding to the temptation to force Owen to look at him, Jack rested a hand on the back of his neck, feeling Owen’s voice sink into his body. Jack didn’t notice how hard he’d bit his own lip until he tasted blood.

Not the only control freak in the room, he thought, as the wound healed.

“Jesus,” Owen groaned, stunned and self-conscious, still speaking into Jack’s neck. “Christmas came early," he chuckled weakly at the inadvertent double entendre, "and I didn’t bring you anything.”

“That’s alright,” Jack said, as he licked his hand clean in a manner that Owen found simultaneously exciting and irritating. Was this business-as-usual as far as Jack was concerned? “It can wait until next time.”

“Next time?” Owen croaked, his mouth going dry. Bloody hell, between him and Gwen, I’m a dead man. Between Jack and Gwen... Owen considered the thought for a moment and filed it away for future consideration.

“Sure,” He grinned the sly, smug grin that Owen now suspected was a part of Jack’s regular foreplay. “I’ve got a lot of ideas for that smart mouth of yours.”

***

I'm giving some serious thought to making the above canon over on [livejournal.com profile] jack_harkness_, btw. He's been so angsty in the Torchwood continuity, and the boy really needs to get laid. Although, if one were to go by the signs-so-far in canon, I should be readying the reams of Jack/Ianto stuff I've been scribbling. They've been verbally sparring for (looks at document) five pages now, and haven't gotten past one smooch and a fade to black. Geeze, guys, what's it going to take? Blood? *thinks* Ew...

Date: 2006-11-28 05:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladykoori.livejournal.com
Very hot. Though, I'm still holding out for the Jack/Ianto verbal sparring. It just keeps sounding more promising the more you talk about it.

Date: 2006-11-28 05:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com
Here's an excerpt. Six pages of drivel and not a bit of smut. Well, I've got a sort of smutty tangent in another draft, but I'm not sure if it really belongs there...

***

"Do you know why?"

Jack shook his head, gloomily pulling at his third beer. "I don’t. It could have been some sort of weird accident, or a side effect or even an apology." Jack said bitterly.

"For what?" Jack struggled to find words. Ianto wouldn’t leave it alone. “For what?”

Ianto strained to hear the reply muttered into the neck of a beer bottle. "Leaving me behind."

"That would be… odd." Bloody horrible, more like.

Jack nodded. "The whole episode was odd, or weren’t you listening?" Jack tried for levity and failed. He toyed with a bottlecap and then threw it aimlessly across the room.

Ianto’s curiosity continued to drive the conversation. "How do you feel about this Time Lord, then? Pretend for a moment that none of all that," Ianto waved a hand, "Has happened. Just as an ordinary man – or as close to it as you ever were – how’d you feel about him?"

Jack looked uncomfortable. "I don’t see what that’s-"

"No." Ianto said with uncharacteristic firmness. Jack looked up from his beer, surprised. "You don’t get to choose where to draw the line, tonight. I don’t think you’ve told me anything you haven’t already told someone else."

Damn it, it’s always the quiet ones who are the most astute, Jack thought with a wince.

***

(and, from the tangent)

Ianto’s tone changed abruptly, became sly. "You know what I think you need?"

"Pray, tell." Jack countered, intrigued by the change in mood.

"Validation. Reassurance that you’re doing the right thing."

"Oh?"

"Who leads the leader? More to the point, who tells him he did well at the end of the day?"

"You make me sound like a horse."

Ianto shrugged with a deliberate artlessness that surprised Jack. It implied volumes about the young man that Jack honestly hadn’t considered. "Pony boys aren’t my thing."

"Why do I suddenly think that you don’t have a regular cup of tea and a heart-to-heart chat in mind?"

"You’re right, I don’t." He paused, and then went for broke. He was outside three beers and Jack had dropped a very unsubtle hint earlier. Put up or shut up time, Harkness... "Have you ever been a submissive – a sexual submissive - before?" Jack wondered how Ianto managed such a casual tone. Had Ianto had this in mind all along?

"I’ve been tied up a few times, sure," Jack replied glibly, trying to hide his surprise at Ianto’s directness. Besides, he didn’t need some 21st century throwback telling him about kink.

"That’s not an answer. Again. You always dodge the questions that cut too close, don’t you?"

"I’m only human."

"That wasn’t what you were saying earlier." He chided. "And you’re still dodging."

"What was the question?" Jack replied swiftly.

Ianto gave him a long-suffering look. "Jack..." he warned.

"Alright. No. I haven’t. Play-acting, sure, but for real?" he shook his head.

"And why not?"

"Because..." he took a deep breath. "Because I’ve never trusted anyone enough." He looked wry. "I’ve run with a pretty unreliable crowd." With one or two notable exceptions, he didn't at

"I’m not surprised to hear it."

Date: 2006-11-28 05:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladykoori.livejournal.com
........

um, guh!

Really like the second one. The first one is good too, but the second one.....so hot.

Date: 2006-11-28 05:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com
Want the rest of the draft? It's by no means complete, I'll warn you. It's missing those finishing touches, like adjectives and nouns and a complete setting...

Date: 2006-11-28 05:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladykoori.livejournal.com
PLEASE! Adjectives and nouns and settings only get in the of way of the sex, which I'm shallow enough to say is the only thing I'm interested in :)

Date: 2006-11-28 05:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com
Oh well, there's not much of that, either. :(

Date: 2006-11-28 05:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladykoori.livejournal.com
I'll take Ianto being bossy. I'm finding it ridiculously sexy.

Date: 2006-11-28 06:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com
(corrected for unintentionally hilarious mistake)

Sent. I'd be keen to hear your thoughts.

And as for Bossy!Ianto, he's strutting about in the wings looking, well, bossy.

I just about fell off my seat on the train home when the mental noodlings had the following words fall out of Ianto's mouth (to Jack, of course)

"You can't touch yourself for a week. Not until we're together again," Ianto said, rather enjoying Jack's distress. "No sex, no wanking, no humping Owen's leg - and no having him do the same to you, for that matter." Ianto added, remembering Jack's agile mind and keen sense for loopholes.

Jack looked crestfallen. "You, uh, heard about that?"

"You're lucky the entire *Hub* didn't hear about it..."

***

So yeah, definitely smut in the wings. Ianto's even worked out a code with his ties, damn him.

Date: 2006-11-28 06:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladykoori.livejournal.com
Oh gods.....I think I might die.

I think Ianto forcing Jack to not touch himself for a week might cause Jack to die, too. Luckily he's got that whole immortality thing going on and please dear gods tell me I did not just have a bit of a necrophilia in my head because that's a level of wrong even I won't stoop to in fic even in a fandom where one of the people is going to just come back to life.

Date: 2006-11-28 06:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com
Y'know, I think that might be the ONLY situation in which I'd sit still for a necrophiliac fic. But I wouldn't like it. Why muck about with dead bodies when there's so many lovely, wriggly warm ones around?

Date: 2006-11-28 06:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladykoori.livejournal.com
Exactly. I'm really rather embarrassed that I thought of it.

*shivers*

Date: 2006-11-28 06:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com
See, this is what happen when we all go wading into D/S. Next thing you know, we're pushing boundaries...

I'm still trying to figure out how to do Jack/Ianto edgeplay with a Jack that can't die. Doesn't mean he can't *hurt* an awful lot. Hm. Wow, that mental image just took a turn into dark... If that goes anywhere, I'll have to save it for [livejournal.com profile] jack_in_cuffs

Date: 2006-11-28 06:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladykoori.livejournal.com
hmm...I guess it really depends on what you think the boundries are on the healing bit. He didn't heal the split lip when Ianto punched him so it could be argued that he only heals if he dies which would mean you could cut away on him as long as you don't kill him.

Date: 2006-11-28 06:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com
That is, indeed, a very interesting point.

I'll have to have a think about that. Indeed, it could very much be a matter of perspective and how much Time-Lord-ishness one believes Jack has picked up.

Mmm, bruised!Jack.

(Waaaay back in my Buffy fan days, I used to lay claim to all of Giles' bruises. It's a weakness)

Date: 2006-11-28 06:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladykoori.livejournal.com
bruised!Jack indeed.

I'm still pretty new to Doctor Who, so this might seem strange but does the Doctor actually heal at an accelerated rate aside from the regeneration? I don't think I've seen him really injured in any of the episodes I've seen.

Date: 2006-11-28 03:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com
In my experience, it's emphasized far more in the books - probably because it's easier to do so - and occasionally mentioned in the audios that, yes, along with not really needing much in the way of sleep, the Doctor can recover from minor to moderate injuries much more quickly than a regular human.

(Gunshots in the chest, however, seem to be a different story, she says, thinking of the regeneration from 7 to 8)

Date: 2006-11-28 10:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladykoori.livejournal.com
Still, until we see/hear Jack doing, I say you can interpret the not dying/healing thing anyway you want.

Date: 2006-11-28 11:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com
I intend to, although you know me and my ongoing, nagging concern with "plausibility" :)

Date: 2006-11-28 06:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darklady7.livejournal.com
Now I am intrigued. :D

Date: 2006-11-28 06:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com
If you scroll down that thread it concludes with bossy!Ianto shocking me clear outta my shoes during my commute home...

Date: 2006-11-30 11:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coffeegirl18.livejournal.com
You must put the Bossy!Ianto part in the fic. Write away, if you need ideas or whatever email me. I write as well...

computerwhizgirl@hotmail.com

Date: 2006-11-30 11:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com
I've got about seven pages written so far and you know what I've got to show for it? Jack agreeing to let Ianto top him.

Dammit. My guys like to talk a lot.

Now I've got the *real* challenge. Figuring out what on earth (so to speak) there is that Jack would be uncomfortable doing. I mean, does this lad even *have* limits to push?

Ianto's got his work cut out for him, that's for sure.

Recently, I posted a big whack of meta (http://fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com/tag/slash) about the whole toppy!Ianto thing, if you want to cast your eyeballs over that and throw in your two cents.

I'll admit that I'm twisting things pretty hard to make it work, but I believe it'll all (ahem) come together eventually. I just gotta make sure the reader understands that the reasons behind the relationship are a little weirder (and less safe) than the usual sort...

Date: 2006-12-01 12:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coffeegirl18.livejournal.com
You mean the part in the comments...already read it. Looks good BTW.

Date: 2006-12-01 12:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com
*nod* that's an excerpt. The document from whence it was taken has been finished.

Well. Mostly finished. A wee bit more exposition occurred to me during a brain-frying meeting a couple of hours ago - just to help make things clear for the reader. My most chronic mistake is forgetting that the reader doesn't know everything I do when I'm writing the dratted story... :)

Hang on, what I meant to say was...

Date: 2006-12-01 12:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com
PS, the big whack of meta (http://fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com/25886.html) is, well, meta - not straight-up fic, but it's borne out of the fic excerpted above, yes. But said meta mostly about what I think is/isn't appealing/plausible in a d/s scene between Ianto and Jack and, I dunno, you might not want to look at that 'til I've figured out the nuts and bolts, so to speak.

Date: 2006-11-28 06:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darklady7.livejournal.com
Bloody hell!! You get me hotter than before! I will get off soon. Like I said before, keep writing.

Date: 2006-11-28 06:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com
You might want to read further down in the comments. Ianto's starting to leave me in the dust.

Speaking as a long-time sub, it's very interesting to try writing from a top's POV. Surprising as hell, too...

Date: 2006-11-28 06:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com
Pardon me, technically it's further *up* in the comments....

Date: 2006-11-28 06:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moviegrrl.livejournal.com
Ok I read it before I went into work...
that *was* a mistake - I've had to just brush over the Jack/Iantt before I get too stuck in (arf!).

But dear God, Jack/Owen, I don't want to like it, but I do, I do..

Date: 2006-11-28 04:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emma-took.livejournal.com
gah.. omg I really didnt think that was going to work when I read the paring, but omg it sooo does!!

Date: 2006-11-28 05:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com
Ha! Another convert! Two more and I get the tee-shirt! :-D

Date: 2006-11-28 04:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bandcat.livejournal.com
where would we be without the occassional PWP nice to see this

Date: 2006-11-28 10:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doctorwhohp.livejournal.com
Umm .. that was .. erm ... Guh!

*fans self*

Jack/Owen is so hot, I wish there were more fics around, any chance of more? *is a pathetic fangirl*

Date: 2006-11-28 11:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com
Is it an underserved genre? I'm surprised, 'cos, y'know. Jack = hawt. Owen = hawt. So Jack + Owen should be, gosh, irresistable, especially when such pairings as smart-mouthed!Owen and toppy!Jack are considered.

Excuse me. I have to go to my happy place for moment.

*ahem*

Anyways, I don't know if there's any more Jack/Owen coming (ahem) from me, as I'm up to my eyeballs outlining what shows every sign of being an epic-length Jack/Ianto d/s thing, but if my fetid brain produced any more Jack/Owen, the folks over at torchwoodslash will be among the first to know.

Thanks for reading!

Date: 2006-11-29 12:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doctorwhohp.livejournal.com
I think I've read about 3 J/O there might be more, but still not enough.

And I think I'm the only person in fandom who doesn't have the Jack/Ianto love.

Date: 2006-11-29 02:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com
It was a hard sell to me, too, honestly, but I've fallen for it.

However, it hasn't my diminished my mad, desperate desire for passionate/angry Jack/Owen snogging. :)

Date: 2006-11-30 04:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com
Incidentally, if you stop by the journal, I've just posted a follow up to the nameless Jack/Owen PWP. It's merely a PG bit of fluff but as you mentioned an interest...

Date: 2006-11-29 12:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katie__pillar.livejournal.com
“Next time?” Owen croaked, his mouth going dry. Bloody hell, between him and Gwen, I’m a dead man. Between Jack and Gwen... Owen considered the thought for a moment and filed it away for future consideration.

Hmmm, now that sounds interesting...

Date: 2006-12-01 10:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cyberamanda.livejournal.com
Wow. Jack/Owen isn't somewhere I'd really want to go in canon, but you make it HOT! Really, REALLY, want to see Dom!Ianto. And not letting Jack come until he was allowed, DEFINITELY.

Date: 2006-12-01 02:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com
*chortle* Thank you for the feedback. I'm meta-ing the whole Jack/Ianto d/s thing at the moment and, after a few more tweaks occur, I think I can start writing the pervy bits for that.

Incidentally, a sort-of follow up to the above (non explicit, slightly comic) may be found here (http://fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com/26932.html)

Date: 2006-12-01 02:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cyberamanda.livejournal.com
Wonderful. I seriously can't wait to read it ;-)

Date: 2007-09-09 09:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-oke.livejournal.com
:D nice! I love jowen, but there's sooo little out there ._. :sigh:
Really nice! More?
Yours GB

Date: 2007-09-10 02:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com
Alas, I've not written much more in the line of Owen smut, but if you follow my tag for Owen Bloody Harper (http://fangrrl-squees.livejournal.com/tag/owen+bloody+harper), you'll find the rest of it, such as it is.

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